Did I sense a feeling of unworthiness in the narrator? He/she appears to be filled with adoration toward the other person. It takes a lot of skill and talent to express the emotions you displayed. Your images are wonderfully descriptive. This poem reminds of Song of Solomon.
I know you've heard this before, Patrick, but your imagery is so flawless and perfect. Your heart is magical, it's romantic imaginings flow fluidly, heart to mind and then to your fingers to alight softly on the page ... ahhh, always a joy, reading your thoughts.