BookRix

How you got so many view with writing just 9000 words?....oh my...

hi

i love this book its sexy

Yep, you're a hot writer... BUT many errors. The many small errors distract from your talent so you have to edit. I think you use a spell checker so that seems good. You need to understand paragraph use around narratives, keeping your tenses constant, some continuity.
I think you got it... and I'd like to see you get better. Hang in there and check out what others are doing and how they do it. Lots of luck!
~ Dave

erotic !

Hey this book is good...so am i

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I just start read, its so shallow, its cheap book, porn material. sorry.

I think it’s a really good