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i love this book its sexy
Yep, you're a hot writer... BUT many errors. The many small errors distract from your talent so you have to edit. I think you use a spell checker so that seems good. You need to understand paragraph use around narratives, keeping your tenses constant, some continuity.
I think you got it... and I'd like to see you get better. Hang in there and check out what others are doing and how they do it. Lots of luck!
~ Dave
Correctly, this book doesn't deserve to be the most viewed book on the erotica genre because it's showing the readers that all could make a story like this and then they are considered an Erotica Writer....
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How can I Download it?
It has the "download" button right there.
wow .. this book is so awsome now i started loving the author
Are you serious?.....