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Ultimate Pleasure

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Ultimate Pleasure

A girl who hits the clubs every other day and sleeps with 1 diffrent guy every other day until she finds the perfect guy. Her own personal sex god.

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Yep, you're a hot writer... BUT many errors. The many small errors distract from your talent so you have to edit. I think you use a spell checker so that seems good. You need to understand paragraph use around narratives, keeping your tenses constant, some continuity.
I think you got it... and I'd like to see you get better. Hang in there and check out what others are doing and how they do it. Lots of luck!
~ Dave

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I just start read, its so shallow, its cheap book, porn material. sorry.

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i agree!!! i couldnt even finish the first chapter

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I really enjoy this book...I just started reading it about 30 minutes ago and I'm loving it.

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Im totally in love with this book!!!! Lol makes me wish my love life could end up like this. You should make this a series or publish it :D

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