BookRix

i love this book its sexy

Yep, you're a hot writer... BUT many errors. The many small errors distract from your talent so you have to edit. I think you use a spell checker so that seems good. You need to understand paragraph use around narratives, keeping your tenses constant, some continuity.
I think you got it... and I'd like to see you get better. Hang in there and check out what others are doing and how they do it. Lots of luck!
~ Dave

erotic !

Hey this book is good...so am i

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awesome sight

I just start read, its so shallow, its cheap book, porn material. sorry.

I think it’s a really good

I really enjoy this book...I just started reading it about 30 minutes ago and I'm loving it.

Im totally in love with this book!!!! Lol makes me wish my love life could end up like this. You should make this a series or publish it :D