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A Power Beyond Man

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User: countzero
A Power Beyond Man
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An unknown bond between a man and a young goddess manifests as a demonic presence bent on devouring the universe.

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countzero

You are getting sleepy, very sleepy, but you will sleep with your eyes open and while they are open you will read my book, lol Yep did it on purpose ;)

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Deleted User

makes me dizzy.....

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countzero

Thank you all so much. It's so great to get such positive feedback from such a great group of individuals! Believe me when I say, I want to hurry up and write this story as much as you want to read it. I'm trying to dig a little deeper and put a bit of my philosophy and even more,my own psyche into this tale... so it comes in bits and pieces. I really want this one to have some depth and really shine! As soon as I have more... Show more

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xmeli.j.nightlyx

Beautiful metaphors! The last pages were really intense. You have a way with words... way to go!

Blessings,
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bluedragon

In kliked the story but found it somewhat simplistic although well written. I would have like more characters and some dialogue to break up the flow.; y old creative writing tutor always preferred dialogue to description
Bluedragon

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judycolella

Almost a stream of consciousness style of writing that moves the story with a flow that matches the man's journey and the passage of time and nature. Great concept, the promise of many adventures, good insight, a conflict and goal that need resolution...yeah, I wanna read more. :D

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