Innocence Cold

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Innocence Cold
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Keywords: 
child, innocent, gone
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I really like this one, but think you should change the format to a poem with stanzas. It reads like one and the meter is very good.

You need to work on your capitalizations.

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stevie.grace

How would I do that?

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