BookRix

I finally finished it! This fan-fic was intense and just, "on the edge of your seat," grade-A SEXY!! I loved it. It is some great writing. You really know how to capture the moment. xD I would really like to see a round 2. xD I bet Araken would too. But, is Chesh cool with this? I think that Chesh and Araken are way sexier though. The best sex scenes I ever read, were between them. Keep going strong buddy. You rock. :D :D :D And thank you Araken, you and Whiplasher were very entertaining!

:( Didn't get to finish it yet! BUT...OMG, O.O, it is a work of smexy art so far...such vivid scenes!! :D I am in male smexiness heaven! Very great stuff!

Damn! And I have to stop just when it was getting super sexy! I love it so far and its great to finally fill in the pieces from what I read before. You are so great!!

I really loved your fan-fic. There were some grammatical issues, but it was good. lol it was a big change seeing Araken act a little timid, and seeing him in the world of the humans. But over all you did great!!!!