Not bad. It's worth fixing it up and elaborating a bit. You can see it in your mind and even try to put it into words but you have to do it clean to win the respect you deserve. I hope you work on it and might even be convinced to help you if you ask. I don't bite. LOL Lots of others on this site will give you a hand, too. You'll see.
COWBOYTake a chance!
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