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THE PACK!

Mates! By:
User: babyluv
THE PACK!
Warning very x-rated but not all about sex alot more!!!

Keywords: 
pack, mate, mates, werewolf, werewolves, cop, sex.
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SomeGuy

I love how people on here and critique this story about it's writing but so far it seems 99.9% of the stories here are crappy at POV, plot, dialogue, description, past-tense/future-tense, and much more. I think this is slightly better than the things I've read on here, at least there's actual effort. Literally saw a story where the author used text-faces while writing and even broke the fourth wall to explain what was... Show more

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Necia

I read the first two pages and lost interest because the language is so bad.

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Deleted User

I love it please continue the story.

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smp1808

The story line is good...it's just that the pov's are all mixed up and I don't understand it....continue your story but fix it a lil

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Deleted User

it very confusing is it the girls or guys POV

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ichigo513

this book is extremely confusing. The grammar is awful , I have barely any idea what is happening. You book has the potential to do well however it needs some heavy editing. Also Adding a description would help as well.

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SomeGuy

"You book has potential" and you wanna jump on their grammar?

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