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Murdered by love [The Short Story]

Really short story (15 words) By:
Keywords: 
short story, death, love, betrayal
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nightshadow333

sorry, don't plan on a sequel... unless anyone really wants me too, i could write something around that... write what comes after, maybe??? If anybody really wants me to, let me know!!!

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writingmum

This is another one I wished I'd read before the contest ended.

I liked the concept but you used superfluous words like 'suddenly.'

You could have wrote it something like this...

'He was not the man I thought he was. Silver gun, silver bullet, blood, darkness.'

Good idea though.
Wendyxx

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barrycarver

Love, betrayal, shiny stuff - it's all there.

But, alas, no sequel I suppose.

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nightshadow333

Thanks guys... i wrote this for a contest. You were supposed to write a story in 15 words... this is what i came up with!!! So glad you like it!!!

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lazarus67

Wow...that says so much..Easy to build a whole story around that.

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