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Beautiful Lies

Beautiful Lies
silver is a girl who is very lonely.something's missing in her life.check out what happens when she finally finds a friend.

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Nice story. I agree with the others about the spelling errors. Look at the book again and read it aloud, you'll find what needs to get fixed better if you do that. Also try not to repeat yourself. You have many words that need to be removed because they are repeated. :)

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AJ Joseph

luv the book and like others have said u did make mistakes but this is great

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I liked your book it was very interesting:0 I think you got talent but you do have some spelling errors but hey alot of people do:)

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Good book :) Liked it. Editing is required a little bit but apart from that, you're fine :)

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Naty Matos

Look out for spacing issues, I know I've had those problems where if you're not careful when uploading my document looks fine in Word, but then all the paragraphs look very close together upon uploading. Be careful with redundancy in some of your sentences, but in all it's a very interesting story and with some minor editing details you have a good piece. Well done.

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I am on page ten and I will finish later after I come home from school!

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