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The letter of truth

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User: jayson840
The letter of truth
James William went to visit his uncle, Timothy, who was dying soon. He goes over to the hospital to visit him, and he hated his uncle though. As he talks more and more, his life's mystery nearly comes to the end.

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mokomonko

it's a bit jumbled I'm afraid. reading it was kind of difficult because of the sense of disorientation, I think you could really have something here if you slow down and explain things more, don't rush the story, describe your scene, set up your characters. It's not a race.

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