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One Beautiful Year

True and Romantic Love :) By:
User: Surya
One Beautiful Year
One Beautiful Year is a short and romantic true love story. The story more over runs between the Vikki and Smruthi, who plays a major role. They both fall in love with each other and all of sudden an other character entries into the story, and that is turning point of it !!!

Keywords: 
Love, Romance, Short Stories
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Deleted User

This was awesome !!! Actually people don't care about the people who care them the most !!!!

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J. M. Rivers

You just need to improve the grammar and tense. Otherwise I liked the story. My fav part is the joke about customer care. I laughed so hard...

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Surya

Yes, I would and I will try my best :) .
Thank you so much for your valuable comments my dear.

J. M. Rivers

You are very welcome.

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judycolella

The story is very sweet and well-told. I had a bit of a problem at first with the name Vikki, since in America it's a girl's name. I had to surmise the main character was male from the context, and then I went and looked at your profile picture and the mystery was cleared up, lol.

Your command of English is amazing, as is your ability to speak so many languages. But there are, of course, grammar issues, which a quick, simple... Show more

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Surya

So lovely.
I am very happy to hear you. I will try to improve :)

Thanks for the valuable suggestions and lovely comment :)

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