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Winter Feeding, Winter Nesting

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Winter Feeding, Winter Nesting
A pigeon notices his flock is thinning out, and decides to find out why.

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evelyns

HAS MY VOTE

PIGEONS ,,, YA GOTTA LOVE EM ..HOW EVER THE SKULL SCARES ME

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rebekahjennings

Hi Sutherland,

I found your story interesting and at times amusing. I'm not sure on the ending though.

Pg 7: My attempted inquires... 'inquires' should be 'inquiries'.

Pg 10: 'Peace' should be 'Piece'.

Pg 11: Over-whelmed is such a common compound word that is generally joined without the hyphen. Also, "Good day" I said in greeting... There should be a comma between 'day' and the quote marks.

Pg 12: ...this colonies 'culture'...... Show more

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briandoswell

A real bird's eye view of life in the city. Did you get this from Homer?

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