User: Terrex
Winners never quit and failures never win.

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Failure is the result of man's pride. Success is yielding our lives to our Lord Jesus Christ.

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I really liked it. There were a few grammatical errors, but other then that I really enjoyed it. Are you going to add more or leave it as it is?(:

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I agree with the errors but I still enjoyed reading this short poem. It was nice and short but had a true meaning to it without over-explaining or anything.

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Review: At last you have found your element. Yes! Keep this up Terrex. Write your feelings. Put it into free verse. You can even do little poems about your super heroes. Keep writing, keep trying and keep learning. You got it. Proud of you for continuing to try. Great job. Robynn

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i like the lesson from it, well the lesson i get from it is that don't give up and you will succeed. I'm i right?
anyways for a first poem nice^_^

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