were truly horror as I must conclude from your title neither one was going to have a hero/heroine triumph in the end. The third being a natural disaster - well that's a toss up - stand and gape or spring into action and get out of the path.
Good job with evoking the response I think you are looking to get...Paula
I liked the concept behind all of your stories. Your first one is the most complex, since it's so intentionally vague--is daddy the hero or villain? I agree with the comment about reviewing your work and fixing the grammatical and/or spelling errors.