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User: muskateri
knowing
A few questions on what people expect in love after the shine fades and everyday life kicks in.

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muskateri

thanks for the comments I appreciate them. I have to edit the paragraph you highlighted because dont know how i missed the "we" out its in my original. thanks though because i didnt notice it. :) xxx

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dholm1

I enjoyed this and thought you were dead on accurate. Very thought provoking. I found only one place where I was wanting to fit in another word. It sounded awkward without it. But please keep in mind, poetry isn't my strong point and I could certainly be way off.
We have the next place where (we)start to feel safe.
Thanks for putting this up for us to enjoy. Stop by sometime and visit. I'd love to hear from you.
Denna

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mirandabm

I enjoyed reading this, and it's so true! I feel that sometimes the rhythm doesn't sit quite right but overall a good read. Look forward to reading more of your work.

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