I like your poetic style! It is as if you've taken memories and broken them down symbolically and poetically. You've successfully conveyed emotions,memories,ideas,thoughts and several vibrant words as poetry that has to be felt as much as it's read. I can see the work that you've put into this and I appreciate your grammar,spelling and punctuation - making this book an enjoyable and easy read.
Thank you for sharing and God Bless,
I liked your work but there are a few things that bothered me about it in a literary way. Your endings on most of the poems slumped and lay dangling like a thought train disappearing around a corner. There were a few poems that managed to do a remarkable wrap up to how the tale started. Keep it focused and your will be famous some day. Leonard Cohen did it and so can you. You have the talent to become a Bard - a poet of great merit.