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The story of us

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User: Yolla
The story of us

I missed you so much. Sometimes you were here, sometimes you were not.

I'll just write you letters till I find you.

We don't know what love is, but we live aching for it. 

Let me show you my journey with love, let me take you to it.


Keywords: 
Love, passion, letters, Hurt
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Artemis

Your book is really amazing. I like your writing style a lot too, hope you will write more books in the future.

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Forever_Karthikeyan's

You are amazing .. Ur pain is so evident and the words you use is drastically strong...Keep going writer:)

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Yolla

Thank you so much! :D

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felixthecat

Very well done, Yolla. It's dark, and sometimes painful to read, but many of your lines, combined with the images you evoke, are really excellent. Nice job.

Maybe in your next chapter you might consider having "him" return with his heart in his hand, extended to you? :)

Whatever. Just continue writing this series of letters.

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Yolla

Thank you! will do for sure.

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uncson3

Amazing work!!...I think that you have a great talent...Be blessed, Danny

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Yolla

Thank you so much Danny! :D

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Annie

Well...I see that u have got quite some good comments... love ur work..I am looking forward on reading more!

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Yolla

Thank you so much!
This means alot really :")!

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judycolella

A quick note: "Try how each one feels like" - page 17. The correct form is either "Try what each one feels like" or "Try how each one feels." The "like" at the end of the sentence the way it stands is redundant.

Okay. That's all that needs to be tweaked. The rest is magnificent.

Too many people think that if you can just rhyme words at the end of each line, you've written poetry. You, however, have grasped its heart and are... Show more

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Yolla

Thank youu, Thank you, Thank you!
This means so much to me:")
I'll edit the content right away, thanks for the note :")

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judycolella

Good second chapter that gives a satisfying follow-up to the first. Some punctuation and grammatical boo-boos but nothing difficult to fix. When it's all done, be sure to give it a thorough, deep edit and you'll have something incredible that many will enjoy reading. Great stuff, great insights, great work!

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Yolla

thank you, thank you!
that really means a lot, I'll make sure to take your remarks into consideration ! :D

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Emo Bitch Is Here

OMFG That was fucking amazing like I don't know what else to say other than say I didn't get this feelings until 3 days ago when I started dating my boyfriend Matthew

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Yolla

Glad you liked it :')

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