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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time.

Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?

It is a well-known fact that the latest technological devices transformed how youngsters use their leisure time. While there are some obvious benefits associated with this development, they are overshadowed by drawbacks.

On the one hand, there are two main benefits when the young spend their spare time on technology devices. First, Internet-based devices allow users to get access to learning materials freely available online to delve into their areas of the internet. For instance, a smartphone connected to the internet will encourage a young English learner to acquire vocabulary and grasp grammar rules via free E e-books. Second, with the advent of technological innovations, young people spend their spare time in more diverse ways than ever before without having to leave the comfort of their home. Chance are they choose to watch videos, play computer and chat with online friends on social networking sites.

On the other hand, the drawbacks involved in using technology in children’s spare time is more significant. Constantly having their eye glued to the screens, they will allocate less time for physical activities what may follow is the development of a sedentary lifestyle. There will be a higher likelihood of various health conditions including heart problems and obesity. In addition, the increase of screen time lowers the chance of engaging in family get-togethers and social gatherings. As a consequence, the children will lose a sense of belonging to family and society causing them to feel isolated and depressed.

In conclusion, youngsters have more to lose than gain from technological consumption. They should strike a balance between the benefit and the cost when expending their time on technological devices.

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The book is “the inner force”
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After Lucifer fought God, God permitted Lucifer to go and test His faithful children even unto the point of death. Lucifer is free to tempt God’s faithful Christians to sin, especially the Cleanliness family.
Sam Cleanliness is God’s Ordained One. God chose him to slay all the demons. The Fallen Angels (demons) are called the Fallen and the Reborn. Victory Cleanliness is a Chosen One and Sam’s little cousin. They usually work together as Slayers.
Lucifer is working with Jezebel, the first earthly demon of damaging and destruction. Jezebel wants to destroy all the believers of Yahweh. This story is a ministry novel of a spiritual warfare against unseen opponents, a battle between good and evil.
The Cleanliness family must put on the whole full armor of God, so they might withstand the Devil’s schemes. New enemies appear to Slayers in every chapter of Fallens series, but the story is still the same as the falling of Lucifer and his demons who rebel against the, Most High God. What is the meaning of this catastrophe?