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madmilt

Far better now!

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rgabel

Hi Melissa,
You did an awesome job on drawing out the conflict in the final confrontation with the attacker. Where you planning on taking this story to other sources? Trying to get it into mainstream media? I hope you do. Thank you for working so hard on it.

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tsukichidarake

Wow, your good. Here's my vote. !)

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joeycosteano

Nicely well written! You got my vote! 4 thumps up!:)

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Deleted User

Awesome. Liked the new ending better. I would vote again, but i cant.:( Still love it!

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becky12345

I like the new ending a lot better. It seems more rounded out. Good luck in the contest.

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La Catarina

hi im fabi im 13 yaers old. u hav talent. ure book made me relize that we ahav to be cautios. i admire u for ure writting.

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cjcchris7575

Great book I'm glad you messaged me.

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lazarus67

Melissa, you're new and improved end is the icing on your already great story. Not only is it thrilling but is also informative. A need for all women to be aware of. There are predators out there, and they are very dangerous.
Thanks a lot.....Laz

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paulashene

along with a story line - I'm not crazy about reading re rapists but this was a good story even with a little love thrown in...P

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