impressing setting and dialogue with a natural flow of writing. I like your style.
I can't tell you what a relief it is to actually find a well-written book on this site. This is fantastic. You should definately add more soon and shoot me a message when you do. :)
If you have time, could you check out my book "The Council Wars?" It's unfinished, but the theme is very similar to this one...
ryt iv made my desion...i am guna bite ya! how could u stop it ther? wen shes just about 2 headbutt Samuel! D: i mean come on! u better ryt more soon, or il..wait am i threatin u ryt now?? :/
but seriously lemme no wen uv updated.
P.S how can u say ur book isnt good?...becuz it isnt...its GREAT! it really is, iv nver read abook like this, n im lovin it. UPDATE SOON. cant make it any cleare thn tht! LoL
Sorry about that. I keep forgetting I'm the only one who can see anything that's happening. I try my best to be descriptive, but I tend to forget things pretty easily. I'll try to add more detai las to what he looks like the next time I update it. Thanks for the advice!