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Deleted User

However, it is a wonderful display of imagery and a great plot. Please update... Your writing style is brilliant.

Sabrina Jade

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Deleted User

impressing setting and dialogue with a natural flow of writing. I like your style.

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Deleted User

This is a truly enchanting and captivating read,with the street scenes so alive you can see the vendors and characters as they move from page to page.

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billythekid

Hey, when's the next one coming out?!!! GOD, I LOVE THE STORY!!!!!!

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guidedgal

Git into all the characters. Can't wait to read about the mission and the outcome! Excellent , descriptive, and all consuming when I was reading this works! Keep me updated on additions! :)

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lucky1138467575603

I can't tell you what a relief it is to actually find a well-written book on this site. This is fantastic. You should definately add more soon and shoot me a message when you do. :)

If you have time, could you check out my book "The Council Wars?" It's unfinished, but the theme is very similar to this one...

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Demonata-Freak

ryt iv made my desion...i am guna bite ya! how could u stop it ther? wen shes just about 2 headbutt Samuel! D: i mean come on! u better ryt more soon, or il..wait am i threatin u ryt now?? :/
Nah! LoL
but seriously lemme no wen uv updated.
P.S how can u say ur book isnt good?...becuz it isnt...its GREAT! it really is, iv nver read abook like this, n im lovin it. UPDATE SOON. cant make it any cleare thn tht! LoL

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PoeticRose

Nice

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apollogods

I'm not into that type of stuff,but your book is really interesting,and I'm kinda jealous of your way of writing=)
its lovely,your vocab,all of it!

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goldfishlover

Sorry about that. I keep forgetting I'm the only one who can see anything that's happening. I try my best to be descriptive, but I tend to forget things pretty easily. I'll try to add more detai las to what he looks like the next time I update it. Thanks for the advice!

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