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LOVE IT!!!

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nicks.girl

Lol! I lurv how (even though she's in pain and crying her eyes out) Delilah has time to pick out a coordinating outfit ;D

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L.D.Manning

that's it (mouth opened) more!!!
but over all it was good I liked it. :)

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giiglesz

i loved it you should write more !!

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gothicstar101

I LOVE IT ^-^

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crystalsun

Daniel, I love Daniel! What more can I say? An overprotective brother, like I haven't seen that before? I enjoyed how you explained the characters in detail. It made me imagine how they looked and what they did. (Personality wise). But what I would have to say is to try to use synonyms for your words. I see same words alot in your sentences. Eg : Delilah felt like collapsing and at the same time Aaron says he was trying to... Show more

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Teenage_Dirtbag

love this sooooo much

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ebonyessence

keep going ill be patiently waiting

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ilovebasketball

love it

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desiredawaking

Wow Great Job One Of my fav books now lol thanks keep continuing the storys :D

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